Just letting it flow
I borrowed the first line from Smigiel in LOtR: The Two Towers. It was a good starting place. They do not know what lies ahead, When sun is dark and moon is dead. When life and lies and death all die...
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"When sun is dark and moon is dead. When life and lies and death all die And heart it bleeds and begins to cry." Just fantastic. You have a good cadence in your poem. It has such a lovely feel ...Read...
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Love Lost The devil came to me last night: He knew I’d lost my love. He brought along his friend named Fear, I got bitten, kicked, and shoved. They told me that she only left Because I wasn’t...Read...
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i love your poems! two of the best i've ever read here in bs."There's too much iron in your blood. Never trust a beautiful woman, Mr. Laurio; especially one who's interested in you."
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Thanks, number. These two I just now sat down and wrote. I have others, but I'd have to look for them."The Joker sang for the king and queen in a jacket he borrowed from James Dean and voice that came...
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MORE! ... darnit. I typed "meow" on accident. These are awesome, really. I love how they flow, and the word choice above all.
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I think they're all stowed away in a box somewhere. I haven't written for a while."The Joker sang for the king and queen in a jacket he borrowed from James Dean and voice that came from you and me....
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i can't wait for more."There's too much iron in your blood. Never trust a beautiful woman, Mr. Laurio; especially one who's interested in you."
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Been good, Xerxus! Busy, but good. I was hoping to run into you sooner or later. What's new?"The Joker sang for the king and queen in a jacket he borrowed from James Dean and voice that came from you...
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I like this. "Listen up! Teamwork means staying out of my way!" -Seifer Almasy, FFVIII
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Not much, still being a professional bum and all, although thanks to Fall, I now spend my days playing FFXI.
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